[1568] Cherubs

Hello all,

I am new and this is my first post. Please let me know if I could improve anything about how I am submitting this. Also feel free to critique my critiques, I read through the workshop but I would appreciate all feedback on how I may better interact with the community.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GWEBjRg7xpmC84h4_78nTh4FCFCMCgN3HlSDgprRhV8/edit?usp=sharing

Crit links: [1621] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1hf58j1/comment/m3newlh/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button [2123, but pre-workshop so not as high quality of a crit] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1hdyghs/comment/m2cmoj7/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button