[2284] Transparent As Glass

Hi all, This is a chapter in my current project. Please keep in mind this is chapter 23. So, there is no character introduction, etc. For context, my main character is having a really awful night. Earlier he was forced to be part of a crime he didn't want to commit, he got the crap beat out of him, he was almost drugged against his will, and he just snuck out to get away from the guy who did that to him. This is what happens after he leaves.

My work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-vmVS1q7hEqn8Y8I1xV3GYUj9uOhXfX8OB1LRRV9bAM/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks in advance.

Critiques: https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1hug2t9/2550_untitled_chapter_one/m6tg6sr/

https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1hyaluy/941_been_meaning_to_short_story_13/m6unwem/