[1576] Acid Washed Desert

Hi all, This is a chapter in my current project. This would be chapter 24 if reading in order, so it's late in the story. There is no character introduction.

These two characters fought pretty violently earlier in the evening. Then Jeremy went out looking for his friend. He wasn't able to find him so he came back home. This is what happens when he comes home.

Also, just because I know this will confuse people, Uncle Victor's painting has been a recurring symbol all through this book. Victor is Jeremy's dead uncle who was a really good artist. One of his paintings was hanging in Jeremy's house when he was growing up. The painting was of a desert, but it was really trippy and colorful. So, the references to brush strokes in the desert, etc, are referring to that painting.

NSFW for sexual content.

All feedback is welcome. Thanks in advance.

My work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cCuCq02OcveOmyWHNVHMT8RSHJOYeiAsIO6IRvYtxt4/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques: https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1i2uhue/1242_the_nameless_island/m833f7p/

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