[1592]The Barista

Literary fiction. I've tried to incorporate every scrap of feedback I got. I hope its better now. I feel like its better.

I lost some things I wanted to say, but good thing about stories is I can just add more story if I haven't finished talking yet. And I hope I added a little more in the story department.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ol1EBK3JW6ZSjEOwLq4Nizdyu7unPud0iHw_o1_SRBs

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