[1305] Center of the Universe

Hello All! Correct number of words in the title this time (sorry mods!) This is a story about two hotel workers on Mackinac Island, famous for still using horses and not having any cars. Would love feedback on dialogue and atmosphere. Thank you!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-1uJGSpuTLnRtDiu1VQc7CvAHKxAfr9jXDCbPHAo-NU/edit?usp=drivesdk

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