[3435] A Raven Plays With Foxes
Hi Folks!
These are the three opening chapters of a Fantasy/Cyberpunk novel that I am writing for practice. The tone and feel that I am shooting for is something like Die Hard in a fantasy adventure. The protagonist is supposed to be a competent underdog that overcomes difficulty and adversity, solving challenges through bravery, cleverness, and tenacity.
Is it boring?
Does the language flow?
Do I over-explain or info-dump?
Does it make some sense to someone unfamiliar with the genre?
[Critique 4] (https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1mvtmm4/comment/n9tnh00/?context=3)
Posted Aug 27, 2025, 10:24 PM UTC
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