[2003] Queen's Club

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Crit 2 - 1372

This is the following chapter in my tennis story. The previous chapter was here. This is a flashback to 1984, the first time Dave and Leo meet. I tried to be better about the head-hopping and stick to strict limited 3rd from Dave's POV.

For non-tennis fans, Queen's Club is a tournament played in June, which is the warm-up for Wimbledon (the really big, prestigious tournament).

Let me know your thoughts. I wonder if the pub scene is too expository, but then I wonder how else I can convey these details about Dave and Leo's life in the story. Thank you.