r/OCPoetry•
HugeCarry249

Spiral

Feedback Please

spiral

We are briefly birds, you and i
Hawks specifically
Our wings flap around each other, talons locked
As we spiral to the earth, i cling to you

The brown in our feathers is similar
They mingle in our twist and turns
We begin and end in the same place now
Our wings beat against the falling sky

As we tumble towards the ground
You let go just in time
If you had not done so
Our feathers blood would stain the ground

The blue caresses our wings again as we soar
The ground would have been kinder to me still
You and i are birds, if only briefly
If not that, i don't know what else we are

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1u6fwvp/comment/orsysu1/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1u6areo/comment/ors2h0y/?context=3&utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

Posted Jun 15, 2026, 3:31 PM UTC

49
Loading comments…