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GrassDash

Crumbling friendship

Feedback Received!

Walking on a snowy winterday

I softly say

I miss you so much

Your cold answer crystallizes in the air

sssh, hush

How do I cope with feeling alone

When mutual love has long been gone

Our conversations used to soothe my soul

But now, our glances leave me feeling like a lost part of a used-to-be-whole

I thought you needed me

Ironically, the most painful illusion was 'we'

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/43i8y5/moonlight_sea_sonata/cznvrks https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4391jr/a_glimmering_drop/cznw1xr

Posted Feb 6, 2016, 3:37 PM UTC

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