Beautiful

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Happy Valentines Day everyone! Here's an extremely cheesy and most likely cliché poem to celebrate. As you can probably guess, inspiration for this one comes from Snow White.


Mirror, mirror,
On the wall
Who is the fairest
Of them all?
 
The one with a heart
Who cares for others
And treats everyone
Like their own mother
 
A person who knows
That sadness will come
But still smiles in the end
When the work is done
 
A friend to the many
And foe to the few
One who likes anyone
For just being you
 
Mirror, mirror,
On the floor
I asked about beauty
And nothing more
 
Beauty comes forth
From within the soul
To say it is physical
Shows you don't know
 
The beautiful need
Not affirm it with me
For in their own acceptance
They are set free
 
This quality cannot
Be bought or sold
It comes free of charge
With a heart of gold
 
Mirror, mirror,
On the wall
You are the fairest
Of them all


 
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All feedback and criticism is greatly appreciated! I was not completely sure how to punctuate a poem with a faster tempo such as this, feel free to throw some suggestions.

Posted Feb 14, 2016, 7:44 AM UTC

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