Condensed time in a condensed metal milk can

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milky paste, silky taste, condensed time in a condensed metal milk can, Ticking time, Tick, Tick, Tock…Clock Stopped, continuity discontinued,

continuous impermanence and impermanent permanence, endless endings, endless beginnings, the beginning ends the ends, the end ends the beginnings.

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Posted May 11, 2016, 6:26 PM UTC

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