This is really interesting. The format is pretty tight, actually. It seems like we are nearing the point of being a somewhat post-literate society in terms of things like videos and memes, and I feel like the way you set this up does a really good job of connecting written word and visual expression. Nice job.

Thanks, my first real poëm I made.
And yeah, the black boxes were intented to show the void at first glance but shows that the void has something in it nonetheless.

When you hover over the black boxes and the text lights up, it reminds of those flashing warning signs; really enhances the effect. Also the visual directly connects to the 'nothing,' it looks empty when you first look at it. 

This is about the contradicton between god and science when they are in fact, the same thing.



[1](#s "You are in a world where the world is made by someone"),
[0](#s "someone so great he is the one").


 [1](#s "As he is made of numbers"), 

[0](#s "the numbers of his fate"). 

[1](#s "The zero is nothing")[ 0](#s " and the one is the one").

[1](#s "Because everywhere are numbers for he is the one").

[0](#s "There was no nothing for there is an infinite of nothing").

[1](#s "and everything together makes") 1.

[0](#s "The path from nothing to one is long and harsh but 2 sees you as frozen").

[1](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4jj8mw/universe/)  [  ^2](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4jiofi/cloud_nine/)     [ ^^3] (https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4jj2hl/depressilepsy/) ^^^4 ^^^^5 ^^^^^6 ^^^^^^7 ^^^^^^^8 ^^^^^^^^9   .




Universe