I am going to be very honest here, and I hope you don't take it personally but I want MORE. By that I mean, more detail, more feeling; I want to almost be able to visualize the smile that you had on your face (im assuming you talk about you in the poem from your use of first person). Are there wrinkles on the corners of your mouth? Crooked teeth or shine? Do they project sadness from the nights of non-reciprocating love? Please. For the love of god. Give me more to sink my teeth in. 

This seems a little clunky to me at some parts but you have good lines and content in this. I especially enjoy your second line.

I think this would work better with forceful line breaks and enjambment, it would play up and compliment the staccato rhythm. As is, its very awkward as my mind wants to read a flowing sentence but its getting confused by back and forth dialog. 

Take this with spoonfuls of salt, but i really think this poem needs more imagery and metaphor to make it more rich. For now all i see is statements. Cant remember who said this but i think this one can help you - dont tell me the moon is shining, show me the reflection on the broken glass

I met you at your party
I didn't want to go
I asked for a drink,
You smiled at me

I met you, and you smiled
You joked
I laughed
I knew this wouldn't last

You didn't come to mind
Two months went by,
You asked for my number
I smiled at you. 

I smiled, and you winked
Card games and
Smoking, every night
Are we just friends?

Are we just friends?
"I like you but,"
But what?
"I can't see us as more"

Friends. 
With benefits, every night
But your kisses scream
I love you. 


https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/6q9e3m/empty_love/?st=J5RMU28U&amp;sh=fb8876ad
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/6puawt/sometimes_i_wonder/?st=J5RMZ29O&amp;sh=53535129

[1. This is a multi part poem, based on feedback I'll consider posting the rest. 
2. I have struggled with trying not to rhyme everything, so I would really appreciate feedback!]

Untitled - Part 1