I appreciate the feed back! You made some very good points. I'm glad you like it though. 

I certainly dig the imagery, and the words are reminiscent of Elephant 6 lyrics. The sorts of ideas that expand into a thousand others. I enjoy those sorts of collection-of-ideas but I don't find this entirely cohesive. Just from my perspective, the title in these sorts of poems holds the entire thing together and lets the reader sort of imagine what the poem's about because otherwise it's rather ambiguous. "There Are" doesn't do enough for me to look any further at this, and it more or less seems like every line is describing a new scene rather than one central concept.

Also, nitpicking, you misspelled "consuming".

There are demons of light in these trees

a clear sensation felt through these falling autumn leaves

 this old ghost smiles and understands why

this digital voice has found another life

a warm whisper crosses my eyes

these are the last words of my current state of mind

there are demons of speak of curiosity peak perfection

can you describe a human emotion?

shifting moods in sunshine illumination

 awaiting self awareness and abusing the word dream

let's embrace this new age rage trip consuming 
everything.

1.https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/7b8lh4/comment/dpgae1h

2.https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/7b85ym/comment/dpgabks