Wow, over all I really enjoy this a lot. I can feel the pull that this light has for you. At the end of the poem it left me wanting more, how does this end? Does the light return? Overall the imagery is quite lovely 

I love this poem. I think for visual effect, even though word automatically does it, don't capitalize the first letter of every line. It's not needed. Otherwise, I love imagery here. Great write!

i really like the theme of this. it isn't so specific as to be isolating, yet isn't so vague as to be generic. enjoying the punctuation as well.

Yeah it's a little painful. you just have to do two spaces after each line, then space. Or for a new stanza just do two spaces. It is a little unclear, I just wanted the c at the end of radiance to go with the c at the start of calling. 

Gotcha. I posted one of my poetry but I couldn't make the new line thing 

You mean with the radiance calling? That was meant to be the radiance of her heart calling me, as that is what I am going towards. 

The features  
You possess  
Beam me up,  
Outside this dead world,  
And into you.

Resting,  
By your heart,   
I'm guided towards it.    
Radiance calling,  
Growing brighter every step.

I enter the ventricle.  
All I see is us.  
All I see is you.  
We twist and spark,  
Creating love's light.

How this crumpled shadow,  
Now alighted,  
Ever lit the features you possess,  
Fate knows.

Two feedbacks:  
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/7tje5n/the_secret_arbitrary_life_of_waiting/dtd1osb/  

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/7td8zn/answers/dtd1wk8/

Light heart