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Poet's Agony (repost)

Feedback Received!

Wrote the depths of my being

But I could never keep time

Felt nobody was seeing

Guess I just forgot to rhyme

//

I will write and I will write

So these words sound just right

Ugh.. how did it turn so trite?

No! You will never see light

//

Mua haha haha

This will rake in the upvotes

In the comments there'll be much brouhaha

And I'll finally be one of the GOATs

//

True self expression might

Just lie behind a veil so thin

A soul bare in plain sight

Yet only so few let in

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8187e7/my_clouds_are_dead_a_nonsense_haiku/dv4ei8m?utm_source=reddit-android

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/81m2zf/born_for_greatness/dv4d9mg?utm_source=reddit-android

Posted Mar 3, 2018, 3:25 PM UTC · edited

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