All the Wrong Things

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#All The Wrong Things

(an imprfct love story)

 
It's not your gentle laughter

Or the thrill when we both touch.  

It's not your beauty (though I

Do adore that very much)

It's all the things you think are wrong,

Your quirks and flaws and such.

Sometimes I think I've got this love thing

Somehow upside-down.  

 

It's not your perfect smile

Or the sunlight in your hair

It's not the way I call you Bunny

When you call me Bear  

It's how you snore when you're asleep

And nibble on your hair.

Sometimes I think I've got this love thing

Turned the wrong way round.

 

It's not your kindness, though no-

One could fault your kindly heart.

It's not your intellect – though

Few could match you smarts for smarts.

It's your twisted little smirk and

How you laugh at all my farts.

Sometimes I think I've got this love thing

Barely figured out.  

 

It's not the way you catch me blushing

When I stare at you.

It's not the easy way that both

Our ones became a two.  

It's every moment that we share

And how I always knew

That all the things you think are wrong

Are perfect through and through.


Author's Note:
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Posted Mar 7, 2018, 8:36 PM UTC

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