I kind of believe that I got what is it that you're saying. Although there is full of repetitions it is attractive and I think the reader stays with it and left with an impression, so well done without any admirable wording.

Thanks for that. Looking over it again, I see what you're saying. If I write it out again at some point, I think I'll amend the third dialogue to be something along the lines of "Will no one help?".

I love the repetition and the meaning is really clear and poignant.
Furthermore, you also varied your punctuation.

However, whilst the second part of dialogue is derived from the first, the third is unrelated. It might sound more like their voice and life is being drained away by using the last word or two from the other two pieces of dialogue to form the third.
e.g. The third stanza could be:
*Louder, the voice cries out once more*
“Help!”
Why?
There’s nobody there.*

Overall, it’s really good though. Just needs a little editing

I do believe this poem is about loneliness or at least the disconnect between the poet-speaker and the world. I guess this would be the definition of insanity (or at least the repetition which other people already addressed). I do like that the end is uplifting, but I think it was too sudden. That's all I have got for now.

This is instantly captivating and the intrigue stays until the final stanza, which as someone already said was a bit sudden. I think that's because of the way it was delivered. The tone of the poem changes too quickly and I think you could ease the reader into that turn more gently.

Through the barren dust a voice cries out,
"Help me! Can someone help!?"
Why?
There's nobody there.

The voice cries out again,
"Can someone help?"
Why?
There's nobody there.

Louder, the voice cries out once more,
"Will no one help?"
Why?
There's nobody there.

The voice is quiet now.
It's not gone. It's just alone.
It helped itself.
Why?
Because it's the only one there.



[1](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/86ucep/a_crow_and_a_robin/dw81gya/) &amp; [2](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/86ue71/if/dw7zu2a/)

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