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shockdrop00

I'm fine (website only)

Feedback Received!
                                   When
                                    I
                                 entered
                                   high
                                  school                                       
                                 I     was
                             six         feet 
                           tall.           Now,
                           at               the 
                          end                of 
                        senior               year,
                         that                 is
                          how               far 
                            I             will
                             have       to
                                  drop

. . .

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Posted Apr 5, 2018, 2:59 AM UTC

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Super_Trippers•

I think I'm inclined legally, ethically, morally, and humanely to say this is far out of bounds even if it is dark humor.

But I giggled far too hard at the end to say it with a straight face.

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Pompomxe•

I thought this was pretty clever, although despite being dark it really appealed to me. The style was also really eye catching and engaging. I love how you incorporated the darkness of it. Very well done.

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shockdrop00OP•

Thank you. It helps to get it out of my head

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