Morning commute; an impression.

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The 8:22 a.m. train
into the bowels
of aluminum city
hurtles us soft creatures
of cul-de-sacs and oak trees
through a brownfield corridor,
past the blurry pocks
of yellow yards and
rusted afterthoughts.

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Posted Apr 6, 2018, 6:29 PM UTC · edited

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