There is something here, just not clear enough. The title doesn't speak of the whole poem. There are several changes that don't seem to go hand in hand. The first three lines, the next two lines, then the next two lines etc. They all seem to be different poems entirely. Try changing the structure perhaps?

Mechanically, capitalizing your lines and using punctuation is distracting. 

I could feel the frustration or pain but like the other comments suggest, there is something missing. I don't get the full picture either. 

Well done on evoking the frustration aspect, I would navigate some of the words you use to try and complete what it is you are trying to convey. 

These are a collection of images. This it about despair, I imagine. Work at making the images work as little pieces of a whole picture. Right now I get the overall image of a person howling, falling, and covering their face as an action. But the ‘searcher’, the ‘man’, the ‘face’ and the ‘something’ are confusing. They feel neither completely separate characters or the same one. 

Otherwise I’d suggest, splitting images and using each to make its own poem. One will feel more natural than the others. 

A minor thing: punctuation can work against a poem sometimes. Removing it might really help the poem feel less chopped up. I’d at least recommend removing your periods as a test. 

Good work.

A twisted howl

Deformed the man to something  
Lesser.  
A blistering sun shook  
The soul of the searcher.  
A cold breeze,  
Kissing the coffin.  
Disease-ridden nails  
Keep the face from seeing.  
A morose descent,  
To something less than dead.  


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A Twisted Howl