To confuse the masses, take off your glasses And type.

Feedback Received!

I whisk words round and round,
A carousel of lies,
Hope on!
Let's go!
Allons-y!
I struggle to find a rhyme.


It's ironic, moronic, mind gone catatonic,
I speak and don't think,
The failure? Platonic.


And so here I am,
Back in the thread,
Rhyming scheme begon!


My poetry makes no sense,
My creativity is none.


A free verse here!


A
Haiku
There


I don't care,
The poet's impaired.


But then I see it,
A finger smudged light,
Do I reach for it?
Not tonight.


For the best of the best,
Don't use the old ways,
For the new and "moronic",
Shh^hide^awayyy


They don't want your edge,
They don't want you paid,
Send you off to a shallow social grave.


"It's makes no sense!"
"It's sounds pre-made"
Please f**k off,
I'm about to be laid.


And if you're confused,
And if you don't get it,
Well that's your problem,
Now get the fuck off Reddit.


https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8cszgg/hey_ya_want_an_apple/dxihsfs/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8busa0/fall_of_eden/dxajyq0/?context=0

Posted Apr 17, 2018, 3:47 PM UTC · edited

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