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breenogg

The Narcissist's Nightmare

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So I'm standing alone.
Amid dozens of strangers.
Don't y'all have homes.
I shout out in anger.

The crowd mills about.
Despite all my wrath.
I scream and I shout.
Just make a path!

No one can hear me.
No one can see.
Just how sincerely.
This is upsetting me.

All that I want.
Is for them to acknowledge.
All of my thoughts.
It gives me such solace.

Try as I might.
I can't make them listen.
I'm about to ignite.
Like nuclear fission.

But then in an instant.
I get some reprieve.
A voice, so insistint.
Says...
"May I take your order, please?".

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8qulr5/trapped_inside/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8qsf3m/flash_or_burn/

Posted Jun 13, 2018, 4:05 PM UTC · edited

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