[2679] Statues

Hi, this is a short story that I finished the rough draft of lately, and it's the first story that I've written in my free time. I'm trying to improve my writing skills, and what better way to do that than practice and receiving critiques. Thank you in advance for your critiques!

Link to the story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S2q5QpRfrkgd1RryKYMraG-GDSZHwsOegSMPX8cXs0w/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques

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https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/900ghf/1347_on_the_brink_of_being_king/e2n1qbp

[1000] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zq55u/1000_a_different_perspective_title_subject_to/e2lh6gb

[3165]

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zo33k/3165_the_transcendentalists_prologue_and_chapter_1/e2mxgqt