How are you?

Feedback Received!

My emotions are clouded in a dusky hue,

I reach out to identify their shape,

but they keep slipping from my grasp,

So I can’t answer when you ask,

how are you?

how are you?

/

I function physically from door to door,

with a face capable of it all,

but behind this facade is a detachment,

where true emotions are absent,

So I can’t answer when you ask,

how are you?

how are you?

/

Mentally I grapple with reason,

to determine where it went wrong.

From blue to purple my palette changed,

a brush wielded by someone else deranged.

So I won’t answer when you ask,

but I will politely return the question,

how are you?

how are you?

/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/932hfj/feedback_request_sunny/e3afjon

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/933qlk/starlight/e3aep83

I can't format reddit posts because I am a goon, hence the use of '/' to provide a gap.

Posted Jul 30, 2018, 2:42 PM UTC

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