I Did Say No

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I let you up, just to see

Could you actually love me

Not okay to drive

Not sure you’d survive

In my bed we lay

Not much left to say

//

You turn and lay on top of me

Your weight so heavy

I couldn’t possibly break free

I think of him in my mind

And right then I decide

This is not what I want to do

I want nothing else from you

//

So it is NO that I say

But I can’t move from the spot where I lay

You don’t hear my cry NO

So in you go

Did I try hard enough

One NO should be enough for you to get off

And then you realize this is wrong

But not for me

For the girl you dedicated that song

And so you stop and get up to go

//

But in the end I did say no

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/95bvm7/complications_of_hate/e3rnelh

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/95b3h6/denver_smells_like_weed_and_greed/e3rnp7v

Posted Aug 7, 2018, 5:03 PM UTC

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