Looking for feedback on design, positioning, style. Does anyone enjoy this style of design? Thanks a lot!
Posted Aug 12, 2018, 11:49 AM UTC
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Love it! Can’t think of any feedback other than the pocket of the left looks a bit high. Other than that, honestly I love the design.
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Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it a lot! Yeah on second thoughts you're right, I think a breast print should be lower and more centered. Cheers for the heads up man! Hopefully launching end of this year so I can hit you up when it's all up and running!
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i’d cop if it were a pocket tee
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Never thought about that, I'll definitely keep that in mind! Cheers for the suggestion.
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Both designs should be a TAD bit lower imo. Not too much
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Cheers for the suggestion, I think you're right. I'm going to get some samples printed and do some shoots soon so I'll post more photos then.
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Yeah! I’d say repost your design, but in the showcase category.
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Nice snake
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Thanks dude!
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Interesting concept. I like the message you are trying to portray.
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Glad you like it. Don't scroll your life away!
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Damn that looks good, but would look better as a pocket tee
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Might have to get a pocket sample printed! Seems like a popular suggestion. Thanks man.
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The large graphic should be lowered and more center. The small one is tough to gauge without it being worn I think
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Yeah on second thought, the prints should be lower like others have suggested too. Thanks for the advice, appreciate it. I'm gonna get a couple samples made and do a shoot soon so I'll upload some flicks in the near future.
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Can I buy now
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Thanks for the love man! Unfortunately I haven't started any production on these but hopefully next few months for sure. I'll post some sample shots when they arrive. I'll hit you up with a discount when they drop.
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nice work a "Like with hearts" design would be so dope.
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Man I'll definitely have a crack at that, cheers for the suggestion! Glad you enjoy the concept!
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I like it but I feel like it could be much cleaner. Maybe switch up the typeface or change whats inside the phone?
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Thanks for your suggestions, appreciate it. I'll muck around with some more fonts to see if any fit the design in a cleaner fashion. As for the left alignment, I tried centering it and it actually looked more messy so I stuck with this layout. Thanks for the advice, appreciate it for reals.
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Also I feel like scroll shouldn't be offcentered like that
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Love this
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Thanks man! Will post model shots of samples soon!
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Not a fan of the style. Feels like cheap clip art.
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Completely fair enough man, it is a relatively simple artistic style so I can why you'd feel that way. Not too much detail on this piece but I didn't want it to be too busy of a design. Thanks for the honestly, it's what I'm after!
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In the story of Adam and Eve, temptation comes to them in the form of a serpent. They couldn't resist. This design speaks about how excessive screen time can strangle you.
g shit mane
Thanks man! Glad you enjoy :)