But I Don't Love You (with original music)

Feedback Received!

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https://soundcloud.com/babylonianjoe/but-i-dont-love-you

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We follow a dolphin

all summer long

it leads to a strange

beautiful pond

and we make

lovely lovely love

but I don't love you

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-- note, in the recording my voice is intentionally anemic to convey the depersonalization and latent self-loathing of the narrator.

In the next couple weeks I hope to record a new version with better singing and more instruments and an overture.

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entry 1, entry 2

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I was very happy to receive all the kind words on my poem "She Killed Herself Blah Blah Blah".

I wrote this song as an unofficial prequel to that poem.

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Posted Sep 28, 2018, 5:31 PM UTC · edited

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