[3615] A Falling Star
Hiya guys! This is another cyberpunk story, this time focused on a group of "cowboys" in Shenzhen pulling off a mission. This story should be a lot less dark/gratuitous than my last one, although there still will be a good amount of violence within it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1i75cfAtG7D6R_T8LwHCG-_8AcwIEY3dIzNrHmfQnBKQ/edit?usp=sharing
Questions:
-How is this as an introduction to the character of Alex? How is this as an introduction to the gang in general? I don't expect this to fully flesh out any of the characters but I want this to be a good starting point for at least Alex/Dutch as well as some sort of group dynamic.
-How's the pacing of the story? I wanted to work in a mild amount of exposition regarding Shenzhen and the Triads within the story, while still maintaining a feeling of "movement" through the story.
-Finally, is the story good? Would it fit well into a novel length project?
Critiques:
https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/9zoatb/1176_sacrilege/?st=joyte1ca&sh=3aac89c2
Posted Nov 26, 2018, 9:18 PM UTC