Casual

Feedback Received!

You ask if I smoke now the truth is I don’t

But us sitting alone, hits just about right

Watch clouds float away,

We don’t need to hurry, got nothing to say

Our eyes can converse, they’ll take us today

We’re back in the bar, they can’t have gone far

not trying too hard, better leave it unsolved

Was it too short, did you notice my linger

My hand on your shoulder, aw why didn’t you bring her

You taste like tequila, the whiskey is strong

Don’t you worry, I’m just feeling this song

Thank god they’re back, the day has been saved

But we’re still riding the night, more to be craved

toes under tables, your gripping my thigh,

we’re playing a game, are you catching my sigh

Never have I ever, another finger drifts down

Who hasn’t they say, I’ve downed your drink,

Hearing last call, you got somewhere to stay

You know its much cheaper, might as well share a ride

And now that you’re here might as well come inside

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Posted Nov 30, 2019, 12:27 AM UTC · edited

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