shroom head
Prostrate--I Wept Bitterly by u/Jammer242
For you, in time by u/parrycrowned
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i thought i knew what i was getting into.
"i mean, how potent could a little mushroom really be?"
famous last words.
it tasted like straight dirt,
as if taking a mound of mud
and chewing on it like gum.
earthy and dry, it left an aftertaste
that can only be described as nasty.
it kicked in quicker than me and
my friend anticipated, when we
both realized how green the grass was
and how beautiful the sky resonates.
i never took the time out of my day
to look up and be in awe of a baby blue
that's been above me for all my life.
the clouds stood in place, frozen
in time while our sober friend kept driving.
i was amazed about the size of our little rock,
and how small we were when looking at this
divine plan the universe had planned for stars
and systems, tinier than atoms when compared
to the vastness of our galaxy.
but, everyone i had talked to said they experience
the same thing, like some sort of revelation
of our place in this world and the purpose of it all.
these minutes felt like hours
and these hours dragged into days,
stretched and almost ripping at the seams.
we kept looking at the clock at what felt like an hour
and only five minutes have passed.
we had picked up some food and drinks for the drive,
parked in an empty parking lot of our local theater
while banging our heads to Amsterdam.
i had recommended an electronic song
and this is where we peaked.
the beginning had me tweaking, tickling beneath the skin
and right against the bone, as if mechanical centipedes
were wrapping around my frame like prey.
the next song was recommended by a mutual friend,
with a high pitched bass that was inside of my ears
as my ear drums imploded and exploded simultaneously
before coming back together just to do it
over and over and over again.
the feeling was uniquely euphoric and breathtaking,
that the music was able to destroy me while also
making me feel ever so complete.
when we made it back home,
our sober friend had already left
and the other and i talked for what felt
like forever with music in the background,
exploring the other one's tastes in music
and personal opinions.
one of the best conversations i've had.
the next morning, time came back
and hit the same as it always does
and the same songs did not feel
like they did the previous night.
this is the best fucking drug i've taken.
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DISCLAIMER : This piece does not promote the use of illegal substances and only acts to tell my experience in a narrative format that I am comfortable with.
Posted Aug 31, 2020, 2:19 AM UTC
I love the story-telling in this piece! It felt like I was in on this journey with you. I noticed how you included a majority of the senses you experienced in the poem. The strongest aspect about this poem is the imagery.
As the reader, it allowed me to envision what kind of movement you were having. The comparison of this movement to mechanical centipedes taking over you made me shudder, which I like, because know I can see and feel those lines.
Thank you for your feedback!