Co-Creation

Our bodies will touch and I will know You.
Through the reflected mirror I will shine Your light
It will become Mine as I become Yours
In this unfolding of co-creation.
Let us tangle in this holding of hands,
This hanging of moments.
Let us merge the Waters of the heaven
and Dust of the earth.

In this desire fueled harmony,
Let us consume the fruits of our labors,
Let us bask in the glory of our light.

Every creator seeks its Creation with fevered passion
And our lust was the paint needed,
Found at last.

Reviews: 1 | 2

Posted Nov 29, 2020, 11:52 AM UTC

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WaughDefuc•

I really like this. I thought, at first, this was about transcendental love between lovers but now am starting to see it relevant to spirituality, work, and craft as well. It's transcendental love, generally, I believe. & I love how you tied it to co-creation. So often our immediate response is to tie it to possession and muck it all up.

Also, as I reread, I found myself always wanting to drop the 'of' in the fourth line to mix up the flow right there a bit if that sort of feedback interests you. All the best!

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