[2296] Carve

Hi there.

First time submitting(or getting any kind of critique for that matter) so I'm open to any feedback really. Specifically I guess I'd like to know how it is as an opening 1 & 1/2 chapters of a roughly 65000 word novel, if its easy to follow etc. Like I said, I've never had anyone read my writing before so I don't know what to expect but I'd like basically any thoughts you have.

My previous critiques(I was worried my early critiques weren't long enough so I've done around triple the word count) : 1806 , 975 , 2794 , 3100

My writing: Carve Chapter 1 & 1/2