[5052] SCIFI PLOT

Hello, this is my first post here. This is a story about people confined within a spacecraft. I've written SCIFI before but never posted it.

Here's what I want feedback on (but anything is welcome of course—please, don't hold back) :

!- were the characters any good?!< ! - did you spot any recurring themes?!< ! - there was a lot of subtlety. Did it work?!< ! - was the tension good, was the plot boring ormeandering?!< ! - any tips on improving these things!< ! - oh and the prose, but that's more trivial for me; which I'm sure you've noticed!<

!This is a rough draft. I wrote it in one day and am terribly exhausted now. My goal here was to see if I could create a decent story in a short amount of time. Sooo, did I work? 😕!<

Critique:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/omzzqr/2703_city_of_silt_alternate_chapter_1_revision_1/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/omthmn/1178_the_trap/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/omtl0h/1803_but_none_of_the_blood_was_hers_ch_4/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/ol24j7/3162_description_of_a_struggle_part_one/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/ojjb6r/2435_king_and_pride_ch1/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

Submission:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WNtt_oKnTDR-Gbgv-29gbo2IrEqPzIE-6c0F_rABn3Q/edit?usp=drivesdk