[2273] Three Times I Lost Someone Else's Keys

I've been writing a lot of stuff as a bit of a therapeutic outlet after being off antipsychotics (under a doctor's supervision) for the first time in just about 20 years. Most of what has come out of my brain has been very heavy on ADHD and mental health issues.

The first thing I submitted here was fiction, this is non-fiction. About 90% real, the only things I invented were new names and whatever small details I don't remember. The main thing I want to know is what works and what doesn't for someone who doesn't give two shits about me.

What made you laugh? What made you bored? What made you feel something?

Be brutally honest, please. I want to get better at this.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DN66yrPT2Ld_oj2LFAxUiM-hAQnSSTHxWGWpU7XRZw0/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques:

https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/p5no5p/888_djob/h9gsqrq/

https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/p5orwo/1980_the_protos_interview/h99tgyd/

https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/p2fx1s/180_grand_theft_wheelchair/h8pq4t1/

Edited to add an extra: https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/p9hids/863_bishop/ha0p6nr/