[4136] The Constant War Within:

First critique:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/pqeef5/3500_war_for_water/

Second critique:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/pw0ny6/651_darker_waters/

3rd critique:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/pw7jvy/1679_eternal_damnation_part_1/

Google link to story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PbTWC7UFZJYI0fCjGHyXh3GUE-GkBEOrhzU2AHMi_YM/edit?usp=sharing

A bit of context:

First story, (pretty cheesy and "deep"), don't hesitate to be destructive, I love honest feedback.

I think I could do a bit better on the dialogues, let me know what you think! (Might have gone overboard on the drama as well lol, do be warned!)