Ethical Necromancy and its Benefits for the Average Consumer [5032]
Por favor. Read-o my story-o, friendo.
What is it about? A man who has been dead for some time now, finds himself brought back to life by two salesmen. They only have five minutes to get him to sign a contract, or he will vanish into the un-death forever.
What critiques am I looking for? Anything, my guy. Or girl. I realize this piece is on the long side, so if you read the whole thing (heck even if you read part of it), I'll take anything you have to say. Let me know if you liked it. Where it could improve. Where it failed. How it just doesn't work as a story. How it made you want to come to my house and beat me up for writing such drivel. Anything you got, I'll take.
Thank you for reading!
Here is my story:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OR7HAaz_onN3RzmWqUulQV7UWrfjiqX4c4NyYy3Bkkk/edit?usp=sharing
My Critiques can be found on these pages:
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qpl30r/631_bitter_september_epilogue/
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qjfa81/3410_courage/
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qlu7nv/953_brackish_water/
Posted Nov 17, 2021, 11:01 PM UTC