[1770] The Future of Paedophilia

I'm as horrified as you're my honoured critic from what came out of my pen.

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I look for a general critique.

I look if you find the third part well-fitting with the first and second parts.

Did the references to statistical figures made sense to you?

Any and all critiques are welcomed. But I must warn you that the story may upset you, as you may guess from the title. The graphical content is kept to a minimum. But there is an occurrence of three rude words, so minors beware!

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The link to The Future of Paedophilia:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AMxLOPgHRxgj4HYUeZynzXrLQMd-Bvpu1oHRk0SAHtc/edit?usp=sharing

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The link to my critiques:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qxpsah/100_capturing_beauty_drabble/ [546]

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qwbckp/ethical_necromancy_and_its_benefits_for_the/ [1329]