[2190] It's Like Uber, But For Eternal Damnation (part 3 of 3)

Hello,

This is the third and final part of a short story I have written. Part 1 can be found here, part 2 here. A brief synopsis:

Nita is the newly promoted CEO of LaVey and Company, the world's premier demonic consulting firm for centuries. They sell demonic contracts to all who are willing to pay the price. Recently a new startup, Satisfyy, has popped up looking to disrupt the demonic contracting industry with their shiny new app and hip young attitude. During the course of the story, LaVey repeatedly clashes with the paradigm shift Satisfyy has brought. Part 3 picks up after a disastrous interview that has left LaVey's reputation in the gutter. Frustrated, Nita seeks the founder of Satisfyy out.

All feedback is welcome, although I'd prefer structural feedback rather than line edits if possible. I'm especially looking for thoughts about the plot: what parts of it felt underdeveloped or unnecessary? Does the ending work?

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QsoW11QxDhir3rCR8Z1UAAIJ9o80xmRN_LwY0CP-du0/edit?usp=sharing

Critique: [1838] + [700] words from my last post. 348 left over

Thanks!