[1915] The Others

Hi All,

This is a reposting of a short story I posted about half a year ago (shoutout to youngstevo for an incredibly helpful critique back then). I made a lot of edits since and I'm now considering submitting it for publication. Before I do, I thought I'd put it through another round here and let y'all have at it once more as I don't want to submit it anywhere if it's not ready/good enough. In other words, if you think it's s**t and not up to snuff for publication, please let me know.

Note that I've changed the title, but I'm not sure which is best and I'd love opinions. My current options are:

• Nabra's Journey
• The Others
• White Giants

I'm open to other suggestions as well.

Also worth noting, I've managed to screw up Google Docs several times in the past. I *think* I've shared it and made it editable. If I haven't, please let me know.

Thanks for your time and input in advance.

Link to story, currently called "The Others." It's about a young girl's journey from her village and her encounters along the way.

Critiques:

Cold Dead Magic [1983]

Horror Microfic [206]

Edit: Fixed a typo.