[2676] Flummoxed

I'm not sure what to think about this story any longer, or how it comes across. It's speculative fiction. At least nominally.

Flummoxed

What was your experience like reading it? Were you confused?

Critiques:

[2729] Tallymarks

[3510] Cherry Pie

[1060] About What Happened

[2920] The Otherbody

[1605] How You Remember

[1744] Future Halcyon Days

[2981] Arbor