Jizz or giss (Bird Bath) 4.0
They call it the city of birds
tweets might not be blue but the west has j’s everywhere.
B.C’s lush forests range
have a Kanatian dreaming about an oasis of strange…
mountainous greenery as far as these blood shot eyes can see.
My shamrock hued lungs begets my head to begin reminiscing-
~Yes sir it was a St. Pattys day blessing
Luck of a non Irish somewhat Spanish galloping archer meeting an emerald plumed purring catbird called DD...
(Ay si si, the Surreal beauty queen showed skills, she just might be the one I seek)
Oh, how she earnestly slobbed on the ice cream
Ate it whole to the bone
honing on the tip of the cone,
With friction and smoke brought forth a surprise for bliss.
Just like the dentist recommended-
extra calcium for her teeth~
Her beak shone sparkled clean
focusing on her wagging rump it seemed to me we both knew this was meant to be...
(Damn birdie… solar capricious winged fury, sparing all sins)
Savoring Spanish bank's scorching sun -
the pecking chick nearly drowned in the melting lactose-free,
But like winters in Whistler walking over the white snow-
she enjoyed every inch of it.
insisting she is a swan
ducky'd count to 10 before beginning to swim
Daffy deep stroked and side glided slow, holding her breath when submerged
Under the creamery
Sopping starry-eyed Venusian with Goat milk bath nourished her skin.
Soon saddled on the charger the green basking robin blissfully chirped.
( Solemn singsong of the speaking sacred sage sophist with a Phd… one satisfied ornithologist)
Posted May 7, 2022, 2:14 AM UTC
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