I also see my typo of “tell” instead “tale”

this poem is a lot but I like the idea, could def use some editing, the word choice like “think how” isn’t very strong, stuff like that


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Sometimes I wish I was a cat so I could have nine lives,

that way I can separate them to different areas and cut ties.


Think how liberating it could be to kill part of your soul,

but live to tell the tell and by removing you now feel whole.


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9 Lives