I love how the use of tarot is seen as both a positive and negative. Its like a glowing review of someone yet just the light isn't what makes them, them.


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Thank you! The capitalization was actually just a typo haha thank you for pointing that out. I just fixed it ☺️

This is nice. I'm not sure I get it, but I *think* I do. I especially love the last line. I'd suggest to be consistent with your capitalization - line 4 is the only one that doesn't start with a capital (unless I'm not reading it correctly \[in which case, I'd recommend some punctuation\]). Overall, an enjoyable poem, easy to read. Keep it up!

I have a friend that always reads cards when something bad happens in her relationship, so this reminded me of her. I actually really like the flow of this poem - it is very short, light because of it’s short lines and I also like the choice of words, especially “perplexed”. Well done!

 

I asked my cards about you 

The sun 

Is what they say

Warm and bright 

Blinding, in a way 

Beaming, white 

Perplexed for days 

Then I realized 

Even the light can make things fade 

&amp;#x200B;

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[2](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/vbnuu9/the_apartments/icbm4eo/?context=3)

The Sun