Life or death
Life has a funny way of showing you who you are. And death has a funny way of showing you what your made of. Sometimes you’re up and sometimes you frown
But don’t look the other way. Living life as we know it weather or not we show it. it will get you.
But don’t look the other way. They say life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you’ll get But the only thing I want is you. And I want you as every piece.
I can’t turn away even knowing I can’t stay But I can’t look the other way. For I know that as soon as I do As soon as I love you. As soon as I’m up As soon as I’m stuck
That’s when you’ll call. That’s when I’ll fall That’s when I’ll miss you That’s when I’d kiss you. And fall into deaths sweet embrace.
Because I looked the other way.
Posted Jun 23, 2022, 7:24 AM UTC
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