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This is really cool. The cadence is fresh and catchy. I want to hear it as a song. I love the comparison of ocean and wave imagery to the deeper inner self. The last 2 lines drive the whole poem home very nicely and succinctly.

I really enjoyed this, can relate ro it greatly, very good use of rhyme. Thank you


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There's a gaping wide divide

And there's an ocean and tide and tide

The waves stop rushing and split aside

There's a dark nothingness inside, inside


And I hide

With my pride, for my pride

And come back to this place, 

Everytime, collide


There's another me, I destroy and grind

Only appears to me, when I dive, imbibe


[https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/vlgno8/bird/](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/vlgno8/bird/)

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Divide