[1302] ICO introduction

Hi everyone :) Wanted to try my hand at something a bit different. This story follows the events a video game of the same name that was released way back in 2001.

I'm mostly concerned with: flow, tension, and effectiveness of both the worldbuilding and Ico as a character. Beyond this, any feedback is welcome. Whatever you feel like giving, I'll be glad to receive!

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AiYfy1KzhJrXGkzHXIpb7idb1YDh4Wb7D6dO4hYKySE/edit

Critiques: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/vm1gyr/1840_temple_of_redemption_ch2_part_1/idzxb1t/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/vilue8/1307_the_loom_within/idhnc5w/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/vi6rn4/1234_homewrecker/idbk6bc/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3