I will make you…

I see this as a very truthful & spot-on metaphor for the metaverse world and all of this, that many of us take part in now. :) While I share all my soul with you, you may mine me for gold. :) I could become a part of your next idea. May I ask what you were thinking as you wrote it? I love it. It's perfect to me. OMG, it is just a lovely poem about loving someone is it? It reminds me of something I wrote a while back. Please forgive me for rambling on I really do love your poem and thank you for sharing it.

God has a vision for me and lets me go through pain for because he is using it to make me better, that's what my dad always said.

I'm not trying to be the religious guy, but this is all I could think of while reading this, I guess it sounds like something God would say.

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it can add more flow if the adjectives were in the same order

for example, swapping the places of “sanctuary” and “prison” since “struggle” comes before “freedom”, unless this is a conscious choice by the author (you)

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