Sweet Grey November
I lived devoid,
Until you joined.
We watched the daylight fade
While the nights grew long,
But our hearts stayed close,
And our love grew strong.
Can’t imagine life any other way,
Than beside you every single day.
And the time we shared together,
Was Sweet Sweet Grey November.
The heart I found,
Will dance unbound.
Among the star-signs that we trace,
Where I am held in your embrace.
Lighting the skies forever,
In Sweet Sweet Grey November.
My dearest love,
My rise above.
Despite the cold you kept me warm,
And we ignored impending harm.
Cherish our time together,
Our Sweet Sweet Grey November.
In the darkness,
And the silence.
Saw the demons leave,
When my angel came,
But the sky still stormed
With my fate unchanged.
It was Summer’s light that stole my breath,
To my dismay I saw these shadows depth.
I will always remember,
Our Sweet Sweet Grey November!
Snowy wonder,
Roaring thunder.
Won’t gently fade without a fight,
I’ll rage against the dying light.
I will not idly surrender,
Not after Grey November.
In the Winter,
Hear me whisper:
'Don’t be lonely, I'm at your side.'
I’ll be the wind of Hallowtide.
But nothing can last forever,
Not even Grey November.
Promise me you will remember!
Our Sweet Sweet Grey November!
Posted Jul 8, 2022, 1:57 PM UTC
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