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i love the repetition. it works so well in this peace. feels like a mantra and still somewhat desperate. i love it

land words heavy  
be healing  
be land words  
  
for be sleep, be land heavy  
  
be land heavy  
be land small  
be small  
  
land words large  
be my time  
my nature be  
  
our words together  
we speak the same language  
be land song  
  
be land  
to sleep, be land  
to be confused  
be land  
  
  
  
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you forgot you have a body